Further Developments

Idea 1 (above)

Idea 2 (above)

Idea 3(above)

These are my further developments after meeting with my group and analyzing my work I’ve developed these. After scrapping one idea from my previous experiments these are what I produced instead, idea 1, for this I have made two developments playing with composition and the use of contrast between the black and the white. After making them though, I’ve decided to try a different, more structured layout, also I’ve decided to use only the pound coin image since it will work more smoothly it will be more attractive to the target audience.

For idea 2, which is pretty much the same as experiment 2 idea 3, I’ve just looked at the image on the left again and tried to strengthen it to its full potential, just to see which would be stronger, I took away the background inside the image to possibly make the information on the image stand out more. After making these and looking at both of them I had the idea to zoom in on the image to strengthen it and make the information the main thing on the image because as it stands I would say that the star is the first thing that you notice when looking at this image.

The third idea has been developed yet again, playing with the contrast of black and white which goes along with the text in the piece, also I’ve added the words tuition fees along the side starting thin and getting fatter, to symbolise the increase in tuition fees visually. Doing this along with adding the images has made it too busy and just unattractive to look at, in my opinion all that’s needed to make this piece work is the text, layed out typographically structured and a little image maybe so that the piece isn’t just text.